ASSESSMENT AND SUPPORT
Writing paragraph points
Assessment Criteria and What A Good One Looks Like
Below you will find the Skill Check assessment criteria for this skill, and underneath you will find an example of what a good one looks like, with a brief explanation of how it fits the criteria.
Assessment Criteria for Writing paragraph points
minus
any of these things
Doesn’t address the question
Doesn’t mention the writer
Uses the phrase “presents ideas about” in a theme question
equals (just) to plus (secure)
all of these things
Addresses the question directly
Uses the writer’s name
Uses ‘presents’ or ‘suggests’ wording, or another suitable equivalent
star
all of these things
All the + criteria
Makes an interesting, thoughtful or detailed point
What a good one looks like
Example task
Write a point for a paragraph in response to the following question: How does George Orwell present Winston in the opening of ‘1984’?
Example response
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Notes on this response
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